Wednesday, January 27, 2021

Feedback on "Our Pitch"

Feedback for our pitch mainly included the following points:

  • Make sure to really figure out the motives behind the woman's attack. The reason behind this is, we run the risk of making her seem insane and/or the antagonist of the rest of the movie, which was not our original intention
  • While we received positive feedback on our intentions to create a choreographed fight scene and create a claustrophobic effect within this small confined space, again motives where called into question "Why this elevator? why can't she wait until she reaches the apartment to attack him?

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